WHAT'S

INCLUDED?

  • Showing vs. telling 

  • Awkward phrasing

  • Passive voice

  • Weak verbs

  • Inconsistent dialogue/inner thoughts

  • Sentence variation

  • Word choice

  • Sentence flow

FEES

  • $0.50 per page

To receive a sample edit, please send a google doc file to: Historyinthemaking2@gmail.com

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